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     Leonard(2003) said as time goes by, interest in  "animation" increased unexpectedly all over the world. Income generated from animation increased highly for the past years. In fact, even the Prime minister praised animation on his speech. He viewed anime as “the savior or Japanese culture.” But there is one question that arose between this ruckus, "how did anime, once regarded as a product produced and consumed exclusively for Japanese children, become such a powerhouse in the global media market?"
     Anime being famous was not because of insisting it to others but because of people are attracted to it. It was at 1960's-1070's, where they "studied or served at the military", when people went home they all boast about anime in Japan. Despite the fact that they don't understand what they are talking about, they are still mesmerized by it, as what one fan said "We didn't know what the hell they were saying, but it looked really cool.”  As technology rises, distributing anime became much easier.


Leonard, S. (2003). Progress Against the Law:Fan Distribution, Copyright, and the 
         Explosive Growth of Japanese Animation. Retrieved from  
         http://groups.csail.mit.edu/mac/classes/6.805/student-papers/fall03- 
         papers/Progress_Against_the_Law.html#_Toc58832261

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1. Freeman(2011) said that "time" is a continuous phenomena which is in a "higher form". that guides the things around us, such as "hearts beat, lungs inhale and exhale, energy pulsates in waves, particles vacillate between negative and positive states". this continuous change  "precedes time as we know it". 

         2.  One of the paragraph in Freeman's(2011) article there was a question "why does Creation necessitate in ratzo v'shov?". he answered that all things that "existed"are divided into two. The other one is regulated by an upper being and the other is completely independent. Then this is where ratzo takes part. As what Mendel(1789-1866) stated it is the mediator of those two.

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1.freeman(2001) says that time is a creation but it is not that important.because the start of everything is not time but creation.

2.freeman(2001) also states that time is a continuous cycle.

Freeman, T. (2001). What is Time. Retrieved fromhttp://www.chabad.org/library/article_cdo/aid/74335/jewish/What-is-Time.htm. Retrieved on July 4, 2011

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Well, actually I just know little about plagiarism, so when a friend of mine gives me a link, I did read about it. And perhaps, it has enlightened me on some things but I know I am still not good enough. The links that my friend gave me is the ff:

http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_types_of_plagiarism.html

http://sse.stevens.edu/fileadmin/sse/academics/resources/PlagiarismUpdate.pdf

Now let’s start on the assignment:

On student1 revision, it is obviously a plagiarized work. The words are copied word for word. He didn’t even put an effort to paraphrase it. He just put it as his own work. In order for him to avoid it, he must put some sources or acknowledge the author in a proper way. Also, he must put some ideas of his own on his text.

On the other hand, student 2 revision looks like a not plagiarized work because he cites the author of the said “thing”. But based on a text I read about plagiarism, it is a plagiarized work, for he didn’t put some proper quotation on it and also he didn’t cite where it could be found. So he must put proper quotation and the sources.